2nd Draft: Decisions and Revisions

Finally, I have reached my second to last draft. In this post I will explain what I have decided to change and implement so my magazine can reach the best version it can be. As well as this being my decisions and revisions, I will be showing examples of what I have had before and that i have now.

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Images of Changes

The images on the left are the newer ones and the ones on the right are the older.

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Cover

For the cover, I followed my class mates critiques and implemted their ideas like, seperating the head lines while also making the coverline more bigger. I also changed some of the color and lighting so it wont be hard on the eyes when read.

TOC

For my table of contents, I edited the visuals just a bit. For example, I got rid of the shadows underneath the shapes while also getting rid of the pattern behind the title of the page, making it so that the title is more focusable on.

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Plans for Changes

I have already implemented my changes, as for as I have already planned everything. I put all of them together to finally come up with the final product.